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Subservient: prepared to obey others unquestioningly.

So subjected and not a contemporary Under another with instructions to carry Beautiful but waiting to be told to marry Sound training in skills could also be the story Embarrassments, liable to cut the calorie Rushing under pressure, too prone to say sorry Void of titles are the stories in this dairy Independence in master’s absence is forgery Either one works or does nothing in a hurry Neither should ask questions or make an enquiry Command taken like soldiers of an infantry Enslaved totally until sense and will tarry

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Date: 3/30/2019 3:24:00 AM
It seems the world is this group of subservients walking huddled to their jobs where they all feel that they should follow close knit in everyone elses direction.... its time we fought to bring originality, and uniqueness to the table.... no more of back breaking rules! lol I like this, funom! makes me want to write an acrostic.
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Date: 12/22/2018 12:46:00 PM
subservience...that's the modern world
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