Submerging Blue Forevermore

He opened his eyes once more,
At night on luminous shores,
With blurred memories;
Tried to recall the past
Before being on shore.

He stood up and looked around,
Simply finding nothing relevant;
He decided to walk cautiously,
Until he stumbled upon something.
A black silhouette, he saw;
It whispered:
"Come to me...";
Then It disappeared.

It's voice reminded Him something;
Determined, He walked miles,
Until he saw It again,
The long forgotten resemblance of It's face,
Roaming by the vast greens.

He followed It,
Through depths of green;
Searching on and on,
A live nature show, alive along the way.

He kept wandering,
Until He stumbled upon liquid blue;
There, He saw It,
The silhouette across the deep blue;
Then, It submerged,
Disappearing in the vast blue.

He followed the sudden urge,
And then, started towards the obscured blue,
Slowly being consumed into the depths;
Getting closer, It merged in front of Him,
The face of the silhouette he once knew,
Making forgotten memories vivid once again...

It offered It's hands,
While staring at each other;
Then, It whispered once again:
"Come to me... My love...";
Remorseful, He took It's arms,
Like the first time they met;
He thought of returning;
But, He followed his memories,
Until there was nothing more;
Only dark blue forevermore...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 11, 2015 at 7:32 AM
Enjoyed your story/poem congrats on your win!
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July 11, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Ruben, Congrats on your Any Old Poem #8 win. Always ~LINDA~
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July 10, 2015 at 6:57 PM
Excellent piece you have penned here....congrats Tim
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July 10, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Ruben, Congratulations, on your awesome win. SKAT
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March 14, 2015 at 9:35 PM
I like this narrated poem, reads like a free verse ballad. I give your poem a perfect 7 + 3.... SKAT
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