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Submerge

I had a glass of tea Then stood beside the sea I touched the waters edge And jumped the beaches ledge I swam almost a mile Then gave away a smile I feel I'll dive again Because I'm sure to win With luck when I am home I will not need a comb

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Paul Callus
Date: 12/11/2020 1:29:00 PM
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What a cute rhyming poem, Angela. I definitely won't need a comb after swimming, but you have long hair and might need one:) Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/11/2020 6:43:00 PM
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Thank you, Paul. Yes, I definitely need one afterwards :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/13/2020 3:26:00 PM
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This frees me up and cools me up.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/14/2020 8:47:00 AM
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;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/12/2020 5:37:00 PM
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Seems like tea is the key!... As for 'comb,' it seals the poem! Enjoyed! Thanks, gw
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/13/2020 3:05:00 PM
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Thank you, Gershon for reading. I just wanted to have some fun with this poem and it was the only thing I could come up with to end it ;)
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/12/2020 3:59:00 PM
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love the verse reminded me of a children song, I am always sing to my grandson.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/13/2020 3:01:00 PM
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Thank you, Eve. I'm sure he loves it too ;)
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Silent One
Date: 10/12/2020 8:45:00 AM
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Very nice...
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/12/2020 10:47:00 AM
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/12/2020 6:52:00 AM
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Since my wife's death I never went swimming again. It's stupid of me really. I love the sea. A lovely poem. A swimming cap should help though. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/12/2020 10:46:00 AM
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Sorry to hear about your loss, Victor. ...I may try a swimming cap next time :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/11/2020 2:29:00 PM
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You are having a great time! Pleasant write.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/11/2020 3:04:00 PM
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Thanks, Vijay. I love the water :)
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 10/11/2020 1:53:00 PM
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A sweetly flowing masterstroke...remains thematically sound still, despite the exactingly ambitious rhyme scheme. Superb job!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/11/2020 3:02:00 PM
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it. :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2020 11:16:00 AM
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- I'm sure you'll win, but I think you need a comb :) - A fun poem, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/11/2020 3:01:00 PM
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Thank you, Anne-Lise. Just something that popped in my mind :)

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