Submarine Races

While all parked in their separate places
Couples were watching the Submarine Races
Trying hard not to show their faces
The chicks with all of their graces
Put their tops back on - their Chantilly Laces!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Konos Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Clever.......very
Ehlinger Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 4:32 AM
Thanks! Sorry, didn't see the comment....
Heemstra Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 6:01 PM
I heard of submarine races from Happy Days. Nice read.
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April 2, 2013 at 4:33 AM
Thanks! Sorry, didn't see the comment....
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