Manoj Kumar Poet Free verse

Submarine

Upper lid shut
All worries out
I dive to meet my target
I will hit it no doubt

I stalk my prey
All he can do is pray
He will go down before, "Oh! Lord" he can say
He will see what will be his last day

God help him, if in my sights he comes
All that is left of him will be blown up lumps
My strike will put him in a tight jam
'Cause I am a Submarine- Yes I am.

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Derrick Burton August 23, 2009 at 12:02 AM always faith and inspiration, thank you, you reach out to others with your poetry... enjoy your night! :):)

Debbie Guzzi August 14, 2009 at 6:19 AM Perhaps you should move the "Oh! Lord" he can say..down a line? I like the lilt of your language when translated to English. Please see my "Dialect around the world contest" and enter? Light & Love

Nadia Shahwan April 25, 2009 at 7:04 AM Beautiful poem.

Karam Misra March 30, 2009 at 6:14 PM Yeah, Manoj, way to go! You seem to be getting better and better. Keep it up. This is one terse bit of poetry which packs in a punch. Liked it very much. Gives good visual imagery of the stalker and the stalked. Predation! kc

Carolyn Devonshire March 24, 2009 at 8:26 AM Nice use of personification, Manoj! This is a great work.

Arany P. March 12, 2009 at 4:51 AM haha kk is so funny! nice one there ... you've hit it no doubt! and thank you for your sweet comments! really appreciate them! ~ Arany

K K Iloduba Jnr March 7, 2009 at 1:53 PM God help u too wen u re out of water too. A good attempt at poetry..........would nt u rather be a shark?cheers.