Subliminal Message

i anticipated your escape should've
covered my mouth in tape can't 
help but bend you over & take,
break the broken back. your
submission is subconscious, a
sighing response of the heart,
knowing better than to fight against
the flow. in your presense i serve
as subliminal message, a plea
for control, a demand for chaos-
there is no correct response.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 27, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Good poem, it's like you just freed your mind on this one, good read Rachel Hart.
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