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SUBLIME WORLD

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 20 NOVEMBER 2016, MY PICTURE, (c)

Sublime World

The steed of spirit I mounted 

And galloped to the end of time 

Passing through the eras of reality 

Reached the world sublime! 






© Demetrios Trifiatis
    20 November 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 9:05 PM
awesome, I want that steed!!!
Trifiatis Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 7:50 AM
God has one for you my dearest, Andrea! Just ride it and will take you there! For you won't be difficult! Thank you so much!
Muideen Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Beautiful poem. It is rare for man to reach the stage he wants. Congrats! Thanks for sharing.......A.M.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 1:57 AM
True my friend Afolabi. God gives to each one of us the opportunity to reach that spiritual awareness and provides us with the necessary abilities to achieve it.
Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 3:26 PM
may we reach our highest, divine climb, demetrios..huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Delighted to see you dear, nette. Thank you for your visit and comment! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 12:10 PM
- A beautiful poem, my friend - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 6:25 PM
You so kind my dearest Anne-Lise! Thank you so much! Hugs!
Gupta Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 4:42 AM
Me too would like to climb, but no direction I can find ... beautiful quatrain ...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 6:28 PM
If you climb, the spirit will lead you to the right direction my friend, Probir! Thank you my friend!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Oh, I love the thought of reaching a sublime world...maybe like nirvana. Lovely Demetrios. ; ) 7
Trifiatis Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 6:29 PM
What a lovely surprise dear Connie! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment!
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