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Sublime Alchemy

Sparkling chemistry between artist and ballerina
Under the apricot sky, they exude verve and zeal
Ballerina twirls, poses, and blows kisses; like magic
Law of Attraction catches them unaware. How feverish!
In the gloaming, the artist sketches his comely muse
Mesmerised by her lithe grace and magnetism
Eureka! They find love before long. A sublime alchemy


BRIAN'S SELECT A,any form,any theme
Contest Judged:  6/10/2020 (Winner: Honorable Mention)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 

Double Double Words To Bubble Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Joseph May
Date written: 05/25/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 1:51 AM
Wow! Congrats! Delighted am I to be exposed to your sublime alchemy. God bless you.
Ibeh Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 6:45 AM
Thank you very much, Beata:-)
Mishra Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:16 AM
What a dreamy verse to paint a beautiful story Edward! Congratulations on your win :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 5:23 AM
Thank you so much, Aditi:-)
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 5:51 PM
such wonderful imagery in your double acrostic, many congrats on your win Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Thank you so much, Jan:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:41 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great Write. Enjoy your win and day...............
Ibeh Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Thank you, Paula:-) Enjoy your day as well!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:31 PM
I LOVE THIS Edward! Into my Faves. An impressive double acrostic my friend, deserving of your First Placement! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Ibeh Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Thank you so much, Connie:-) I appreciate the fav!
Hamilton Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Another masterpiece Edward, congrats on a fine win!
Ibeh Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 12:05 PM
Thank you very much, John:-)
Watt Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 12:11 AM
Wow, Edward, ballet + art + love = a wonderful poem. Double congrats for your double acrostic #1 win today, my friend ~ John
Ibeh Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 6:36 AM
Thank you so much, John:-)
Chutani Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Sublime attraction between the artist and his muse. Congrats on this fine win.
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 11:43 PM
Thank you, Mohan:-)
May Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 10:14 PM
A magic potion of attraction, Congrats on your win Edward..
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 11:42 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Joseph:-) Most obliged.
Michael Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Nice one...I enjoyed it
Ibeh Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thank you so much, Arturo:-)
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