Get Your Premium Membership

Sublime

Lost in the world , where i used to live, standing near the sea, on the cliff. The heavy tides , slapping hard on rocks, as if trying to make them stop, make them stop from dying, like they did, stop them to fall off that grid, in memory of those who jumped from that cliff, surely they must have heard of that myth, its just an odd domestic tiff. In the mildest , greenest grove, out of the calm of the coldest air, inside the swollen and lonely cove, i saw them standing there. A little while later , with the clouds all grey, i went on moving, a little bit astray , the sun redeeming light, as if punishing itself, for what they have done, for the matter of proving oneself. Black silhouettes dancing from pole to pole, i thank whatever god's maybe, for my unconquerable soul, beyond this place of heaven and hell, wherever i may be at, is a place which appears to be entirely well, and the world beyond all that. If i were gone in another life, i'll knew that earth would spin, i won't cry i'll just survive, an escape from the world i'm in. Shall i dwell in the dark forest? or shall i seek the kingdom by the sea to see, the reason i'm here, is this the place to be. Lost in the world, where i used to play, now i want to run, it was like yesterday when i wanted to stay, if i could see this glorious land once again, which now prevails in my dream, through the eyes astounded by beauty, on the ending gleam. Closing my eyes i am back from where i begun, touching the seas and the mountains, sublime like sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/14/2014 11:34:00 AM
Cool poem,well written,and an interesting message,keep it up
Login to Reply
Saxena Avatar
Manya Saxena
Date: 12/29/2014 3:31:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/9/2014 10:13:00 AM
I find this poem very evocative and full of promises. Manya you are a powerful writer. Love...rajat
Login to Reply
Saxena Avatar
Manya Saxena
Date: 12/9/2014 11:14:00 AM
Thank you sir .. Thanks for reading my poem .. You surely have motivated me to do more..
Date: 12/8/2014 11:51:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Manya - I choose your first very touching, beautiful and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs