Subconscious Mind Song

Dark night, cold rain
you and I standing there
beyond our understanding
the ocean our domain

in front of it we shiver
trying to decipher

Subconscious mind is showing us
the dream has taken over us
what is the meaning of the signs
Have we met in another life?

CARLOS MONGRUT
2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 25, 2013 at 10:47 AM
- A enjoyable poem to read, thanks Carlos ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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