Sub Mind

Sub-mind The good n the bad, the left n the right, Zombies will come, if you just drug em, smite, The right hand of God, left, evil’s delight, Death by pinned dolly, the evil incites, Kadachi man pins you, by eye, just one look, You know you will die, fish on the sharp hook, Legends don’t lie, bone pointed, so crook, So dies native Australian, his life surely took, Yet faith is the answer, left brain does it like, You don’t want the cancer, see it die, shrinking quite, Subconscious will follow, just program it right, You are what you are, a mighty spirit of light. Don Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mcknight Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 9:34 PM
you've taken and hidden me amongst the intellegent that have a sense of humor and lack of starch in theee, ya know undies. hahaha thanks Don.
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 10:36 PM
undies dont wear, helps the growth not the hair, swinging precision, ol horse he says yair, too right...
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 6:19 PM
That sub-mind is boggled down with some weird thoughts..Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Mcknight Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 9:30 AM
BY the way, I caught a fish through his back fin 1 time, the next week my best friend Brode, caught an eye of a fish, My children kind of got frustrated the week, I played a couple times cause it never ever happned before. "swim away....no don't, swim away.... no way. but It wasn't too much play. The kids still call him/ Brode Fisheye and they're in college. hope I'm not bothering you. Cindy/Journey(we have em)
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 7:30 PM
Accidently jag hooked a yellow belly through the fin on back, and pulled him in sideways Jack, felt like a bucket of water mack, big ol fish landed down the track... LIKE YOU HONEY JUST A BIT, YOU N I TOGETHER FIT....SOMETIMES
Sivey Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Am I in the right mind...I'm left handed, or should I say I'm ambidextrous, does that mean I'm left and right brained...ahhhh the greatness of it, ha ha ha, lovely write Don, enjoyed greatly!!
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 7:43 PM
GOOD IDEA TO USE BOTH HANDS oops, right hand and left ...the brain expands, helps a poet with his demands, two brains to understand, imagination grand, sometimes....
Mcknight Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 9:16 AM
not to interupt, but my teacher used to crack my hand with a ruler for using my left hand; then Dad raised his boasterous voice at the table for cutting using my steak knife with my left, I am also ambidextrous, sport wise, knives gun to practice, yes. nothin' more.
Johnson Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Russell , i am ambidextrous yes too right, right brain left brain blessing quite, play pool either hand i do, throw a knife either one too, the poets might?
Mcknight Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 8:53 AM
the conflict of all is the frontal lobe of me brain...yeah whatever, experienced many things as a humanitarian, took your verse in, all things are Under God, that is under his love of the light You speak so about and may I say, your verse was intent, glad to see the light at the end of the tunnel! good piece. Cindy
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 7:44 AM
The left brain and then the right never give up without a fight. Good one Don. Tony
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