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Su the Cleaner

There once was a cleaner called Su, Who spent all her time in the loo. As she cleaned up the pan, She upset a young man: He was doing a number two.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/9/2012 7:00:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your limerick being featured.
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Date: 7/8/2012 4:39:00 PM
jack, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/8/2011 6:51:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Jack. Nice going. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Ralph
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Date: 3/8/2011 6:06:00 PM
Oh, I love this one, Jack. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your splendid win in John's contest Jack. An honor to be included with you on the winners list with such wonderful poets. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:00:00 AM
So good to see you at the top Bro. Jack. Congratulations on a very worthy limerick's honored second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of john, jack
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:12:00 AM
hehe, Jack you had me laughing out loud in the office with this one.. Congrats on your win ;)
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:06:00 AM
Congrats Jack on your top ten win in the Slapstick Limerick contest ..a great write and win luv..so enjoy...
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:08:00 PM
That poor SU!!! and she got into a stew!! Congrats on a well deserved win, Jack!
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:37:00 PM
hahah very humorous and hilarious write, jack
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:31:00 PM
Pity Su, but pitty the man as well, Jack. I think your muse IS screaming into your ears. Keep listening to the muse because it's inspiring some great poems. This is sooo funny! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:29:00 PM
LOL Poor Su...LOL Poor man....LOL I chuckled at this one...thanks
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:10:00 PM
Different topic for sure..Sara
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