Su the Cleaner

There once was a cleaner called Su,
Who spent all her time in the loo.
As she cleaned up the pan,
She upset a young man:
He was doing a number two.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 7:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your limerick being featured.
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July 8, 2012 at 4:39 PM
jack, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Taylor Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 6:51 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Jack. Nice going. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Oh, I love this one, Jack. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your splendid win in John's contest Jack. An honor to be included with you on the winners list with such wonderful poets. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 10:00 AM
So good to see you at the top Bro. Jack. Congratulations on a very worthy limerick's honored second place. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of john, jack
Neels Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:12 AM
hehe, Jack you had me laughing out loud in the office with this one.. Congrats on your win ;)
Sweetheart Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:06 AM
Congrats Jack on your top ten win in the Slapstick Limerick contest ..a great write and win luv..so enjoy...
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:08 PM
That poor SU!!! and she got into a stew!! Congrats on a well deserved win, Jack!
Mehta Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 12:37 PM
hahah very humorous and hilarious write, jack
Devonshire Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 12:31 PM
Pity Su, but pitty the man as well, Jack. I think your muse IS screaming into your ears. Keep listening to the muse because it's inspiring some great poems. This is sooo funny! Love, Carolyn
Konos Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 12:29 PM
LOL Poor Su...LOL Poor man....LOL I chuckled at this one...thanks
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Different topic for sure..Sara
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