Stupid Cupid

You: Arrow
            Arrow-Cupid misplaced
Pleased, I am
              To validate this man

Basically: Pleasingly loved
                     “Apple of my eyes”
Heart-hanging from doves
                     My lullaby

I would take that bullet
                        For you
Sacrifice My all
                        For this
Make Him wane
                        For us


Now, am I but dust?
                    That sea sluiced away.
Shall on no account, again
                     Cupid’s arrow stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 10:20 AM
Awesome! I Freaking Love This. Ohmigod! Lol Sorrii. I Just Got This Really Big Burst Of Energy But No This Really Is Good! Oh And Check Your Mail Lol. Peace! Boo
Cantu Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 1:39 PM
I like the title, it is pretty catchy jojojo and the spacing of the poem, makes the reading like a tire-jumping game or a platformer like Super Mario 64 jojojojo thanks for the experience!!!=D
Austin Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 7:39 AM
You are my kind of guy! Yes! Love your humor and your very original style. Love, daver
Megens Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 7:35 AM
yes cupid is riding on the fence you have a way with words beautiful write look forward to reading more
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