Stupid

I can’t believe I didn't know – 
Stupid is that fails to see
for every thing revealed to me,
so many more you didn't show.

I live denying constantly – 
Stupid doesn't realize
that passion’s fire within your eyes
will never only burn for me.

The signs I didn't recognize – 
Stupid is that clings to thought
that people change, when each day brought
the warning of my faith’s demise.

Lover’s plea was all for naught –
Stupid is that firm believes
your hardened conscience ever grieves
in fear it will be someday caught.

Although I stay, my spirit leaves – 
Stupid is that sits in wait
for you to change my awful fate, 
my mind, my trusting heart deceives.

I live in this uncertain state – 
Stupid is that silent stays
and hangs on every loving gaze
in hopes of masking growing hate.

This girl that sees your cunning ways – 
Stupid thinks that long ago 
can sometimes just be simply so
and foolishly, your game she plays.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Mason Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Beautiful use of the form, Tracy. I do not believe that anyone who wants to love and be loved is stupid ... just human and so we learn hopefully and the future unfolds in a better way. Congratulations on your write being a feature of the week here at the Soup!!
Tye Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 11:46 AM
Congrats on this amazing piece being featured. :) Cheers, Alana
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January 17, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Tracy, you SO deserve a featured spot with this piece! It's simply fantastic. <3 With admiration, Donna G.
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January 17, 2009 at 10:02 AM
tracy, this is EXCEPTIONAL!!! CONGRATUALTIONS on your featured poem of the week. Lainie
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January 14, 2009 at 3:15 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul
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January 12, 2009 at 7:22 AM
Love is blind sometimes but never stupid. Stupid are the ones whoi don't see what they've got until it's gone. Excellent write. Congratulations on having "Stupid" featured. Vince
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January 12, 2009 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tracy. Love, Carol
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January 11, 2009 at 2:45 PM
Interesting view in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Keep on writing and sharing your work with us. Best wishes. Karen
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January 11, 2009 at 1:57 PM
We all have our "stupid" moments...but you were wisely gifted with this excellent poem! Congratulations on this one being featured this week...well deserving! ~ Carrie
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January 11, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Nothing stupid about you or this write. Human and emotional is more like it, along with immensely talented. Congratulations Tracy on a most excellent featured write. Love, Shar
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September 10, 2008 at 7:15 PM
this is excelllent work girlfriend.i absolutely know where your at.
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