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Stunning Beauty

Snow covered benches and grass in the park I kick snow like sugar across the path As the trees are creaking, noise in the wind Winter is here, with white colored decorations Covering these places I like to visit But the air is fresh, while the stunning beauty, Surpasses every encounter there is Heidi Sands 12/2/19

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/3/2019 3:46:00 AM

Having lived moments like that when in Canada, I have enjoyed your poem for it revived memories so dear my friend, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2019 2:55:00 PM

Hi Demetrios. I am happy that this poem could bring back memories for you. I hope all is well. Thank you. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/2/2019 2:48:00 PM

Love the first fall of snow, none here yet though but heavy frosts, love the imagery in your lines. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 2:53:00 PM

Thanks Tom. I am happy you loved this. It is very pretty to see :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/2/2019 2:10:00 PM

You brought the scene to life visually and feeling-wise I experienced the kick of snow, the fresh air and beauty while I heard the trees and wind. Bringing all that to my senses makes this poem quite a success in my view and I truly enjoyed each line of sensation. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 2:21:00 PM

I am so happy to hear that CayCay. Thank you for taking the time to comment and tell me that. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM

- New fallen snow is beautiful, Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM

It sure is. Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/2/2019 1:34:00 PM

Nature sure does provide a beautiful show no matter where you live. really nice Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM

Yes, it sure does. I hope you are enjoying the show where you are Chris! Thank you :)