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Stunning Beauty

Snow covered benches and grass in the park
I kick snow like sugar across the path
As the trees are creaking, noise in the wind
Winter is here, with white colored decorations
Covering these places I like to visit
But the air is fresh, while the stunning beauty,
Surpasses every encounter there is

Heidi Sands

12/2/19

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Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/3/2019 3:46:00 AM Having lived moments like that when in Canada, I have enjoyed your poem for it revived memories so dear my friend, Heidi! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 12/3/2019 2:55:00 PM Hi Demetrios. I am happy that this poem could bring back memories for you. I hope all is well. Thank you. :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/2/2019 2:48:00 PM Love the first fall of snow, none here yet though but heavy frosts, love the imagery in your lines. Tom Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 12/2/2019 2:53:00 PM Thanks Tom. I am happy you loved this. It is very pretty to see :)

CayCay Jennings Date: 12/2/2019 2:10:00 PM You brought the scene to life visually and feeling-wise I experienced the kick of snow, the fresh air and beauty while I heard the trees and wind. Bringing all that to my senses makes this poem quite a success in my view and I truly enjoyed each line of sensation. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 12/2/2019 2:21:00 PM I am so happy to hear that CayCay. Thank you for taking the time to comment and tell me that. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM - New fallen snow is beautiful, Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM It sure is. Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 12/2/2019 1:34:00 PM Nature sure does provide a beautiful show no matter where you live. really nice Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM Yes, it sure does. I hope you are enjoying the show where you are Chris! Thank you :)