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Stunning Beauty

Snow covered benches and grass in the park I kick snow like sugar across the path As the trees are creaking, noise in the wind Winter is here, with white colored decorations Covering these places I like to visit But the air is fresh, while the stunning beauty, Surpasses every encounter there is Heidi Sands 12/2/19

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Date: 12/3/2019 3:46:00 AM
Having lived moments like that when in Canada, I have enjoyed your poem for it revived memories so dear my friend, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2019 2:55:00 PM
Hi Demetrios. I am happy that this poem could bring back memories for you. I hope all is well. Thank you. :)
Date: 12/2/2019 2:48:00 PM
Love the first fall of snow, none here yet though but heavy frosts, love the imagery in your lines. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Tom. I am happy you loved this. It is very pretty to see :)
Date: 12/2/2019 2:10:00 PM
You brought the scene to life visually and feeling-wise I experienced the kick of snow, the fresh air and beauty while I heard the trees and wind. Bringing all that to my senses makes this poem quite a success in my view and I truly enjoyed each line of sensation. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 2:21:00 PM
I am so happy to hear that CayCay. Thank you for taking the time to comment and tell me that. :)
Date: 12/2/2019 1:51:00 PM
Lovely, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM
- New fallen snow is beautiful, Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM
It sure is. Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/2/2019 1:34:00 PM
Nature sure does provide a beautiful show no matter where you live. really nice Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2019 1:38:00 PM
Yes, it sure does. I hope you are enjoying the show where you are Chris! Thank you :)