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Jeff Albrecht is an artist with Park West. This particular piece of art, to Jeff, is 100 percent happy. I have taken liberties with my poem. Artwork is not shown. You can look up the artist through Park West. I had the honor to meet this very nice and interesting person. 

red palms, white sun leaves are religiously green red is raw the canvas soaked is it fire, blood or passion the sun vertiginous lava alive romantic sun experience soaking up cataclysmic rays raise the temperature hang onto the assorted bark it’s tropically airy sip its burst of twilight trio of trees purple-cling as if plum vines h e l d them together, fearsomely to let go is to disappear into the atmosphere red palms, white sun the artist s t u n s

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Date: 5/6/2025 1:13:00 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your high placement in this contest with an imaginative stunning poem. As you recalled to let go is to disappear into the atmosphere. Wish you a delightful day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2025 4:33:00 AM
Thank you, Krishnanand! Have a wonderful day!
Date: 5/5/2025 11:39:00 AM
"to let go is to disappear into the atmosphere" frank, deep- o you won with this one, doesn't surprise <3 xxoo "raise the temperature hang onto the assorted bark"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 3:15:00 PM
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :)
Date: 5/5/2025 4:46:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your awesome win dear Kim. ^___^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 6:00:00 AM
Thank you Jcb!
Date: 5/3/2025 9:15:00 PM
Read this excellent ekphrasis in one breath. I love the flow of each line that evokes metaphoric beauty. Warm wishes ^___^ JCB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2025 5:10:00 AM
Thank you so much! Love the use of your keyboard characters :)

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