Notes About The Poem

Jeff Albrecht is an artist with Park West. This particular piece of art, to Jeff, is 100 percent happy. I have taken liberties with my poem. Artwork is not shown. You can look up the artist through Park West. I had the honor to meet this very nice and interesting person.

Stunning

red palms, white sun
leaves are religiously green

red is raw
the canvas soaked

is it fire, blood
or passion

the sun vertiginous
lava alive

romantic sun experience
soaking up cataclysmic rays

raise the temperature
hang onto the assorted bark

it’s tropically airy
sip its burst of twilight

trio of trees purple-cling
as if plum vines 
                            h
                          e
                         l
                        d

them together, fearsomely
to
   let
       go

is to disappear
into the atmosphere

red palms, white sun
the artist  s  t  u  n  s

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Krishnanand Guptar

May 6, 2025 at 1:13 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your high placement in this contest with an imaginative stunning poem. As you recalled to let go is to disappear into the atmosphere. Wish you a delightful day.

Kim Rodrigues

May 6, 2025 at 4:33 AM

Thank you, Krishnanand! Have a wonderful day!

Paige Hind

May 5, 2025 at 11:39 AM

"to let go is to disappear into the atmosphere" frank, deep- o you won with this one, doesn't surprise <3 xxoo "raise the temperature hang onto the assorted bark"

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2025 at 3:15 PM

Thank you! Glad you liked it! :)