Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Stuffed

I used to eat 'til I was stuffed
    never knew when I'd had enough
  Some folks called me roly-poly
    others found me gruff

  Now I'm satisfied with just a little
    which does wonders for my middle
  And did I mention my transformation
    from hostile to hospitable

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J. Summers February 19, 2023 at 12:06 PM This worked well for me, but I’m still working on hospitable. John Gershon Wolf February 19, 2023 at 7:25 PM Just don't check into a hospital. That's hospitable enough for me, anyway.

Jennifer Proxenos February 19, 2023 at 10:22 AM Great stuff! Well done my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Gershon Wolf February 19, 2023 at 7:26 PM Thanks, Jennifer!

Shirley Hawkins February 19, 2023 at 1:05 AM Gershon ,your loss of weight makes me feel blue. Now there won't be so much of you. That makes me very sad But happy for you, you ain't done bad. Congratulations and hurray but will the smell of food lead you astray? Gershon Wolf February 19, 2023 at 7:24 PM Oh, that smell of food. Pure torment at night. But so far, so good...

Beryl Edmonds February 18, 2023 at 9:17 PM Gershon, you must be chuffed now you’re not carrying so much round the middle, and have gone from gruff to hot stuff… Belle Gershon Wolf February 19, 2023 at 7:22 PM Very chuffed indeed, Belle. (New word for me).

Deb M February 18, 2023 at 9:13 PM Love this one Gershon….can you teach me how to do that!!! Debx Deb M February 20, 2023 at 1:45 AM Lesson 1 should do it Gershon Haha….Thanks….Debx Gershon Wolf February 19, 2023 at 7:20 PM Lesson #1: Knock out all your teeth... Call me when you're ready for lesson #2... lol.