Stuff This

A Martian came down on my lawn One overcast, wet, windy morn I said oh my golly I’ll fetch him a brolly But when I got back he was gawn

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/26/2021 6:41:00 PM

Not only has he upped and gawn, He’s taken off with the lawn. The laugh is on me, It’s fake grass you see, And it’s quite battered and torn.

Terry Flood
Date: 1/27/2021 12:08:00 AM

Aha... ASTROTURF! Thanks for dropping in Belle.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/26/2021 11:06:00 AM

Hello Terry flood, Haha-Haha-Ha. thank you for the laughter. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/26/2021 3:05:00 PM

Hello Terry Flood, I needed it. Terry. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Terry Flood
Date: 1/26/2021 2:26:00 PM

Happy to give you a giggle, Darlene. Terry

Jan Allison

Date: 1/26/2021 5:04:00 AM

ha ha ha love it Terry:-) wish they would send a ray of warm Martian air its horrid today:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood
Date: 1/26/2021 5:17:00 AM

A shower poem in more than one sense. I literally made it up in the shower this morning... as you do. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks Jan. Terry