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Image result for pictures of a little boy raising his hand in the classroomI tried this as a challenge as this is a challenging form to try to write. It was not easy. LOL..I don't know if you will figure it out or not. 

Student Said to the Teacher

Teacher came
Student said, " John shot
A bird", Mrs. 
Smith". she said,
"I don't see no dead bird," Sid
Classwork continued
Teacher asked, 
After teaching them
To write by
A certain
Writing style expository.
"Can you write on snakes?"
Little boy
Raised hand, "It might bite".
Teacher said,
"Set me up
For that answer, I know that".
After laughter ends____

     
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 2:48 PM
I enjoyed reading. I also find writing in this Shadorma style was Not easy. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............
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March 20, 2026 at 3:01 PM
Paula, glad you enjoyed reading this one. This is not an entry in the contest. I will try to write one though that I think will be suitable and I hope it will be before the contest ends. Sara K
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