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Stuck Three Point Zero

Take the big chunk of the credit If not for you, things won't fit Gravity pulls you to the ground You're here but I don't hear a sound Cleaning out the dirt and the grime Get up and go, leave the primetime Leave the unnecessary stuff Sing your song "Enough is Enough" From all these, now I know better Where's your resignation letter Don't rely solely on sheer luck Go, leave now, refuse to get stuck

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/16/2015 11:14:00 PM

Saw you online while having my lunch. Reminded me to read, some more of your stuff. I see the now familiar sharpwit lacing the lines. Made me smile, made me think, made me wonder, what bothered your ink. Nevertheless, for the substance and form, I give it a 7, sorry can't give it more. Handshakes and smiles in our land of thousand isles. :D Kim

Jesus De Castro
Date: 2/18/2015 3:15:00 AM

Thanks Kim for taking the time to read my work. Your first name reminds me of my first phone name in my first BPO where a neutral name was required (can't use JESUS so I used KIM).