Jesus De Castro Poet Quatrain

Stuck Three Point Zero

Take the big chunk of the credit
If not for you, things won't fit
Gravity pulls you to the ground
You're here but I don't hear a sound

Cleaning out the dirt and the grime
Get up and go, leave the primetime
Leave the unnecessary stuff
Sing your song "Enough is Enough"

From all these, now I know better
Where's your resignation letter
Don't rely solely on sheer luck
Go, leave now, refuse to get stuck

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Kp Nunez February 16, 2015 at 11:14 PM Saw you online while having my lunch. Reminded me to read, some more of your stuff. I see the now familiar sharpwit lacing the lines. Made me smile, made me think, made me wonder, what bothered your ink. Nevertheless, for the substance and form, I give it a 7, sorry can't give it more. Handshakes and smiles in our land of thousand isles. :D Kim Jesus De Castro February 18, 2015 at 3:15 AM Thanks Kim for taking the time to read my work. Your first name reminds me of my first phone name in my first BPO where a neutral name was required (can't use JESUS so I used KIM).