Milton Toran Poet Rhyme

Stuck On You

I'm a wad of gum,
Waiting patiently
You're my lowly victim,
So unsuspectingly

All gooey on a sidewalk,
Diggin' your classy shoes
A sticky treat is lurking,
And you don't have a clue!

I can see your sole,
I even know your size
SQUISH! I finally got you,
Oh, what a sweet surprise!

I'm laughing as you curse,
Then scurry to the grass
Strings of sticky chaos,
Is now a pesky mass!

Now scrape your gummy shoe,
Along that rugged curb
Have I gotten next to you?
Your face looks quite disturbed!

Remove that soily heel,
Submit to your defeat
You look like Captain Ahab,
While limping down the street!

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Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2013 at 4:46 AM - Like it .... like the humor,Milton.- Well written! - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Fisher July 23, 2013 at 8:06 PM Your poem is fun and whimsical. I like point of views that are "out of the box".

Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2013 at 7:22 PM This is funny! You may want to change the form to Personification. Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2013 at 7:24 PM Please consider entering my Girl Rising Contest. It would be great to hav a guys take on the subject.