Sandra Haight Poet Monorhyme

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Stuck In a Snowglobe With You

Stuck In A Snowglobe With You 


I'm stuck in a snowglobe with you,
	and snowflakes embracing us too.
Our own Christmas day with a view
	so private 'neath our sky of blue.

And when the snow stops, right on cue,
	we'll have good fun stirring flakes to
quick whirl them around and redo
	them falling and swirling anew.

Outside is just ours to review
	from cozy protected see-through
smooth bubble of glass.  Let's pursue
	enjoying our day and construe

we're happy in our glass venue!
	What more could we ask for, it's true,
here, quiet, relaxed, whoop-de-doo!
	I'm stuck in a snowglobe with you.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Christmas Cheer
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues
Judged: 12/26/2018

Monorhyme with Anapestic Trimeter Rhythm -/--/--/

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Jan Allison December 27, 2018 at 7:25 PM what a charming poem Sandra, i too loved the use of whoop de doo lol:-) hugs Jan xx Sandra Haight December 27, 2018 at 7:33 PM Thank you, Jan! I had fun putting it together! Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper December 27, 2018 at 11:37 AM Congratulations, Sandra, in Kim's contest, a beautiful poem. Happy New Year! Hugs Eve~`* Sandra Haight December 27, 2018 at 7:21 PM Thank you very much, Eve, for your congrats and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra

Carolyn Devonshire December 27, 2018 at 6:44 AM Beautifully written and I really enjoyed your rhythm and rhyme, Sandra. It seems the "Snowglobe" was one of the most popular titles chosen and you did a splendid job with it. Congratulations on your win in Kim's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn Sandra Haight December 27, 2018 at 7:20 PM Thank you so much, Carolyn! I am pleased that you enjoyed it, and it was a fun one to work on. I appreciate your frequent visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues December 26, 2018 at 11:07 PM Sandra, I LOVE the whoop-de-doo! Such a cute ending! Congrats on your win in my contest! <3 Kim Sandra Haight December 27, 2018 at 7:18 PM Such a fun contest, Kim, and thanks for liking my poem and the nice placement! Hugs, Sandra :)

Mahtab Bangalee December 17, 2018 at 4:58 AM snow-globe its love around of globe// lovely monorhyme

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 16, 2018 at 11:27 PM This is so sweet Sandra! Excellent monorhyme. Good luck in the contest, xomo Sandra Haight December 26, 2018 at 7:57 PM Thank you very much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra