Stuck In a Snowglobe With You

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Stuck In A Snowglobe With You I'm stuck in a snowglobe with you, and snowflakes embracing us too. Our own Christmas day with a view so private 'neath our sky of blue. And when the snow stops, right on cue, we'll have good fun stirring flakes to quick whirl them around and redo them falling and swirling anew. Outside is just ours to review from cozy protected see-through smooth bubble of glass. Let's pursue enjoying our day and construe we're happy in our glass venue! What more could we ask for, it's true, here, quiet, relaxed, whoop-de-doo! I'm stuck in a snowglobe with you. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Christmas Cheer Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues Judged: 12/26/2018 Monorhyme with Anapestic Trimeter Rhythm -/--/--/

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2018 7:25:00 PM

what a charming poem Sandra, i too loved the use of whoop de doo lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2018 7:33:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! I had fun putting it together! Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2018 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations, Sandra, in Kim's contest, a beautiful poem. Happy New Year! Hugs Eve~`*

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2018 7:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve, for your congrats and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/27/2018 6:44:00 AM

Beautifully written and I really enjoyed your rhythm and rhyme, Sandra. It seems the "Snowglobe" was one of the most popular titles chosen and you did a splendid job with it. Congratulations on your win in Kim's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2018 7:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carolyn! I am pleased that you enjoyed it, and it was a fun one to work on. I appreciate your frequent visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra