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precious power you possess wind me up, make me spin Christmas carols fill the air at your side, I skate with joy on a glass rink in a child’s toy captured in this fantasy dome idyllic village surrounds us two hearts twirling endlessly red skates shiny and new effortlessly, I glide toward you happiness gleams from a child’s eyes she rocks our world bestows sparkling snow flakes adorn our holiday scene we pirouette, forever sweet sixteen *December 8, 2018 For the “Christmas Cheer” contest sponsored by Kim Rodriguez

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/28/2018 9:42:00 AM

We did indeed do the same theme; great minds lay in the same gutter, you know! We even both included ice skating. I adore your imagery as delivered in beautiful free verse, Carolyn - just beautiful! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Ann Gilmour

Date: 12/28/2018 2:00:00 AM

Wow, this is just adorable Carolyn and takes me back to my childhood when I was utterly entralled by my snowglobes, always wishing I could be inside them too. Thank you Carolyn and congrats on your win, kindest thoughts Ann xx ps I still love them today and my latest buy is exquisite...

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2018 7:09:00 PM

your imagery is absolutely delightful Carolyn, I always loved my snow globe when I was a child:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2018 9:35:00 AM

Congratulations, Carolyn, in Kim's contest, a beautiful poem. Happy New Year! Hugs Eve~`*

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/26/2018 11:01:00 PM

A pretty fantasy set in a snowglobe! Congrats on your win in my contest! <3 Kim

Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/21/2018 9:18:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, this is such an enchanting write. One feels peace when reading through the lines. What joy, your heart does sing and wonderful images are born in the mind. This reads like a winner. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/11/2018 12:08:00 PM

So enchanting a write. Held me spellbound. ... Filled with Xmas cheer!! Beautifully done, Carolyn. ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/11/2018 9:12:00 AM

Hello Carolyn, this poem is beautifully written I love the snowglobe. also musuc boxes. Have a nice day my friend.

John Gondolf

Date: 12/10/2018 10:45:00 AM

Nice imagery in this flowing verse, Carolyn, best of luck in the contest. John

Sherry Asbury

Date: 12/8/2018 7:40:00 PM

Love snowglobes and this just danced with joy - excellent poem...forever sixteen.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/8/2018 8:41:00 PM

Staying sweet sixteen would probably be the best part of living in a snow globe. Thanks for reading, Sherry

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/8/2018 6:19:00 PM

Wonderful, just the title drew me in, very beautiful!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/8/2018 5:08:00 PM

Such a happy poem, Carolyn, so positive..love this..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/8/2018 4:55:00 PM

A heartwarming verse Carolyn, with a lovely Christmas feel to it. Good luck. Tom

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/8/2018 8:32:00 PM

Have you seen some of the reindeer limericks Tania is getting for her contest? Outrageously funny. Thanks for stopping by, Tom. Let me see if you have a reindeer write...

Charles Messina

Date: 12/8/2018 1:21:00 PM

Beautiful, Carolyn! A great write for the contest, awesome imagery! Best of luck and have a nice weekend! Charlie

Bobby May

Date: 12/8/2018 12:29:00 PM

That's beautiful Carolyn!! I hope you win!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/8/2018 12:28:00 PM

You captured the imagery in your words: ..I skate with joy on a glass rink in a child’s toy. And the joy of listening to the holiday music..it is quite real to a child and grown ups too. Thanks for the magic, Carolyn.

Bobby May

Date: 12/8/2018 12:24:00 PM

That's beautiful Carolyn!! I hope you win!!

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/8/2018 9:31:00 AM

You capture the the girl in the dome...Expressed her feelings... and through the eyes of a child brought joy..Creativity galore...Beautiful write