Heather Buxton Poet I do not know?

Stuck

STUCK!!!!!!!

Aagh, I’m trapped in the toilet
Look - the lock it is broke,
Help me, what do I do?
I’ve pushed it and pulled it
And yet still it won’t budge,
I’ve not more ideas, have you?

I can’t reach the light
And the time’s ticking on,
The temperature’s started to drop,
It’s cold and I’m hungry
So now, what to do?

I can hear someone
Quite close, just outside,
What are you doing -
Ooops the door slides!

Now feeling silly,
So totally blond
What a crock!

Now free
I thank -

YOU!!!!

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Dorian Petersen Potter October 16, 2014 at 3:03 AM Heather, you know that your poem can be either ...in the free verse, light verse or narrative category. Either one of these three would be okay if you want to...:) xxxx D. Heather Buxton October 16, 2014 at 3:33 AM Thank you Dorian, it's a difficult choice that one, was aiming for the I don't know form as I have never written in that one before :) x lol

Dorian Petersen Potter October 16, 2014 at 2:56 AM Heather I love your funny poem a lot! That was lots of fun,lol....Hahahaaa, lol...enjoyed! I give you a 7my friend! Love humour a lot, you made me smile. Thanks! Hugs! Love and light! xxxx D.