Stuck

i'm stuck
its neither night nor morning.
time has stopped
no birds can be heard
no people can be seen 
it seems these few minutes do not pass
oh but there i hear something
movement 
morning
finally
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 2, 2008 at 12:39 PM
Your sleep!!,wow that was a good way to put it.great poem WRITE ON
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