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Struggle of Love

Two branches one thin one thick One small one long One weak one strong Through the night branches shake Beside the lake Waiting for so long to be together But it is the weather That is stopping them; There love; always for each other Making them impatient To hug each other But it is too far to hug Blaming the weather there time goes Blaming the wind their time passes Oh!! So angry they are; Waiting for wind to be on their side; So they can meet where ever they are At last! Wind blew and branches moved They met each other At last!!! But there was no time Wind blew again and they moved again Bringing them as far away as it could Again angry they were Again waiting for the time To meet each other where ever they were; Sorry for them I feel; __________________________________________

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Date: 5/9/2013 9:16:00 PM
Abdullah, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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