Struggle of Love

Two branches one thin one thick
One small one long
One weak one strong
Through the night branches shake
Beside the lake
Waiting for so long to be together
But it is the weather
That is stopping them;
There love; always for each other
Making them impatient
To hug each other
But it is too far to hug
Blaming the weather there time goes
Blaming the wind their time passes
Oh!! So angry they are;
Waiting for wind to be on their side;
So they can meet where ever they are
At last! Wind blew and branches moved
They met each other At last!!!
But there was no time
Wind blew again and they moved again
Bringing them as far away as it could
Again angry they were
Again waiting for the time
To meet each other where ever they were;
Sorry for them I feel;
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/9/2013 7:55:00 PM
Abdullah, well done... enjoyed every entry on the winning list... congratulations in "The Highlander contest" ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 8/8/2013 10:09:00 PM
Abdullah :-) :-) . CONGRATULATIONS!!! ---- in Nathan's "There can be only one" contest... Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:33:00 PM
congrats Nate
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Date: 5/19/2013 1:44:00 PM
HI Abdullah, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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Date: 5/3/2013 1:34:00 AM
Thanks Linda or PD:) I will look forward to it
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:29:00 PM
Abdullah, here I am again to comment the poem: this is sad, and ends sad... wish time was on their side... excellent...LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 4:44:00 PM
Abdullah, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems right now and the future. I like the enjoyment of meeting new poets and reading any new poems you may want or need feedback on. I hope the next time you are on the soup; you find the time and highly recommend your own favorite poem or your next post. You can always stop by and say hi if you like…. Thanks you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:16:00 AM
Nice poem.
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