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This entry was probably the result of Robert Lindley's blog on Sonnet's.

Would you, with me, traverse an unlined field deny the jagged edge of distant peak stroll lazily amid protected calm or listen as the ragged mountains speak. For some find solace in the chasms depth cling tightly to the icy broken ridge while others look within holding their breath in passage cross the swaying “volta” bridge. While I respond to ever present winds a call to fledgling feathers to ascend to tease distant horizons broken lines unwary of the dangers they portend. And yet the pen will falter in its quest for form and function will decide what’s best. ©11/21/2019 FREE VERSE VS STRUCTRURED Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/22/2019 4:53:00 AM
This is awesome. I love it... Bless you, Gina
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2019 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Gina....Robert made me do it!!!
Date: 11/21/2019 2:11:00 PM
Woah John, this is a great sonnet.. i do like the first two stanzas, often sonnets are very simple, but it seems like Robert has inspired you here..great ending.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2019 8:25:00 AM
Thank you SO, I find the sonnet's complicated simplicity baffling at times.

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