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Struck the Strings of My Heart

You came and looted my heart I didn't own it, you stopped it from falling apart Executing easily such heist And leaving me with thirst For your sinful hands again to struck the strings of my heart Your glances leave me longing Your stares leave me shivering A touch of your soft hands makes the flames inside of me burning I am owned by none other I am tamed by you forever Forever baby ain't enough , me and you surely know Even if your fire eat me alive, I won't let go Keep me in your beating heart Let forever always be the place to start Playing peek-a-boo with my pines Playing hide and seek with your signs You come and go Killing me slow Oh criminal ! You got me enslaved You hacked my heart and make me crave Wonder how you have that innocent eye When you make my passion cry I wonder how my wings are broken but still can fly Wonder how my wounds are open, but you refuse to let me dieI t's healing me by the warmth of your side It's too obvious to the universe that your love is immortal in my veins , there's no way to hide You've murdered my self control And sent me burning in coal Holy criminal! That's what you are I won't sue you, please give me more scars COLLABORATION WITH WHITE SAGE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/18/2016 8:04:00 AM
Love justifies any expense - namely trust. Obsession, captivation - it's a crazy thing. Wonderfully expressed Dalia and W. Sage...
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 3/18/2016 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear we both appreciate it , and glad that you stopped by , hugs / / :)
Date: 3/18/2016 1:29:00 AM
The skin of the heart scars like none other, and often heals with rigid, erotic lines my Violet Poetess...this poem excites me with the taste of forever...J.A.B.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 3/18/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear for the most sweet comment , I'm flattered really , much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Date: 3/13/2016 2:32:00 PM
- "A touch of your soft hands makes the flames inside of me burning" ..... a hot line in this great co-write! - hugs X 2 // Anne-Lise :)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 3/13/2016 2:40:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment , it means alot for both of us , many thanks for your pleasing visit and hugs / / :) dalia and white sage.
Date: 3/12/2016 4:46:00 AM
such a powerful poem Dalia and White sage a great collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 3/12/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear for your great support and for your lovely comment , we're delighted by your pleasing visit , hugs / / :) dalia and white sage.
Date: 3/11/2016 7:32:00 PM
You've done a great work collaborating with me to write this piece, I really do appreciate it, and am glad we did collaborate again...you've got great potentials as I've always said and you proved it again by making this piece an extraordinary one, let your pen forever run gold Dalia...
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 3/11/2016 7:39:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear , I'm really truly honored and happy with this beautiful collaboration , hope to do more in the future with you my friend , I'm glad I did a collaboration with such a talented unique young man , wish all the best always and forever , hugs / / :)

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