Stronger

this is not what i wanted
not what i planned
it just happened so fast
too fast 
and that was the end
of us of me
i cant stand the fact that i fell for you
i loved you
so stupid
you took advantage of that love
you hurt me again and again
everytime you put your hands on me
i told myself that would be the last time
but it did
it got worse
i felt weak
helpless 
hurt 
but that all changed 
im stronger now
than ever before 
strong enough to tell you its over 
im better off without you
youre alone
pathetic 
the end 
goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 20, 2011 at 8:42 PM
I like it. A lot. I think the way you write is wonderful. It would have been a little more appealing if you used capitals. But that's alright. If you feel like this, go and read some of my poems. They have similar themes.
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