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Strong Will

Frail stature, strong will. Endurance of mind wilts doubt. both frail- absent will.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2013 11:10:00 AM

Hello Lucas, thank you for the nice comment. :-) and thank you for the sharing of your haiku. To be honest I lack a strong will at times... a clever thought... always~ Linda

Funom Makama

Date: 3/23/2013 9:46:00 AM

beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2013 6:55:00 AM

Well written in a haiku Lucas! - oxox// Anne-Lise :)