Strong Point

Evasion, the dagger's sharpened strong point
Slowly has pricked love's joy until now gone
Tedious the effort to time appoint
Verbiage to one who speaks from heart of stone

Fluffy moisture laden clouds float across
the blue sky, gentle breeze stirs heart's desire
Thus love's awakening to you like dross
Intimacy through deep channels expire

Can love's embers be rekindled to flaming
hot Tabasco Sauce, open up cold heart
Let in spring's whispers of love not blaming
Uncork the closed mind to thoughts uncharted

Let not evasion of thoughts and needs trap
Reach forth and receive all from love's tap 

Finis'.......

Just for PD
Finished May 16, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/11/2014 10:54:00 PM
Sara This is such a powerfully strong emotionally deep and straight from the heart poem that tells it like it is. Thank you for the nice comment on my Toys And Steam poem.
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Date: 5/25/2014 11:28:00 PM
Big congrats on your win my friend!!!
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Date: 5/24/2014 5:04:00 PM
You made your point...very strongly indeed!! You put your heart into this write....much enjoyed :) Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on the win my friend!!
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Date: 5/22/2014 9:37:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement.... Stop by my latest blog, "The Glass SLipper" if you'd like. Take Care, and enjoy a smile or two. XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 5/17/2014 1:12:00 AM
Yes..' really well finished Sara, now loves tap, i've never found the 'handle' take care Joe..'
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Date: 5/14/2014 12:29:00 AM
Hope you get a proper 'stab' at finishing this write Sara, keep well Joe..'
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:37:00 PM
Finish please, you stir my interest and let me down!! lol Going to bet it will be a finished gem when you find the time!!! A start like that promises greatness, greatness I tell you my friend!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/16/2014 6:21:00 PM
You did not disappoint!! I win my bet with myself!!!! Simply must add this great write to my fav.!!
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