Sara Kendrick Poet Sonnet

Strong Point

Evasion, the dagger's sharpened strong point
Slowly has pricked love's joy until now gone
Tedious the effort to time appoint
Verbiage to one who speaks from heart of stone

Fluffy moisture laden clouds float across
the blue sky, gentle breeze stirs heart's desire
Thus love's awakening to you like dross
Intimacy through deep channels expire

Can love's embers be rekindled to flaming
hot Tabasco Sauce, open up cold heart
Let in spring's whispers of love not blaming
Uncork the closed mind to thoughts uncharted

Let not evasion of thoughts and needs trap
Reach forth and receive all from love's tap 

Finis'.......

Just for PD
Finished May 16, 2014

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Robin Davis June 11, 2014 at 10:54 PM Sara This is such a powerfully strong emotionally deep and straight from the heart poem that tells it like it is. Thank you for the nice comment on my Toys And Steam poem.

Robert Lindley May 25, 2014 at 11:28 PM Big congrats on your win my friend!!!

Paul Callus May 24, 2014 at 5:04 PM You made your point...very strongly indeed!! You put your heart into this write....much enjoyed :) Congrats on your win. // paul

Robert Lindley May 23, 2014 at 9:21 PM Congrats on the win my friend!!

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 9:37 PM Sara, Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement.... Stop by my latest blog, "The Glass SLipper" if you'd like. Take Care, and enjoy a smile or two. XOX~ LINDA

Joe Maverick May 17, 2014 at 1:12 AM Yes..' really well finished Sara, now loves tap, i've never found the 'handle' take care Joe..'

Joe Maverick May 14, 2014 at 12:29 AM Hope you get a proper 'stab' at finishing this write Sara, keep well Joe..'

Robert Lindley May 13, 2014 at 8:37 PM Finish please, you stir my interest and let me down!! lol Going to bet it will be a finished gem when you find the time!!! A start like that promises greatness, greatness I tell you my friend! Robert Lindley May 16, 2014 at 6:21 PM You did not disappoint!! I win my bet with myself!!!! Simply must add this great write to my fav.!!