Strong Mocking Drink That Destroy

Alcohol builds 
challenging disorder 
effects,

  future gets high 
intoxication;jeopadised

       living moments.

Now one`s pleasure_ _

  quandary, retribution 
surely torment_ _

     unsparingly;

Both children and 
parents may suffer 
mental

   and emotional  
consequences in life.


chipepo lwele
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 17, 2012 at 2:02 PM
CHIPEPO, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
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September 19, 2012 at 2:18 AM
lovely
Brown Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 11:07 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Chipepo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Lwele Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 3:48 AM
Carol,thank you for commenting on my poem
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