"strong Flowers"

The rain can't reach my flowers today..
The branches block the lanes and keep it away..
Someone reach up and clear the path for me..
Hopefully these flowers can survive for you to see..
Brave and strong they peak through the cracks..
Maybe my words and love can give it what it lacks..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bailey Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Nice poem. Thanks for reading my poetry.
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 1:27 PM
I hope that the shady place that you chose to plant them is just right for the flowers that you chose of plants that like shady places to live and grow..Excellent write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and reading my write about the cemetery..Dad has been dead fourteen years but his memory lives on in my heart and in my conversation..Sara
George   Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 10:16 AM
The will to live is strong. Between my patio stones, the weeds thrive. Great writing, Michael. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Romantic and sweet!Celene!
A   Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 8:05 AM
with your loving words they'll surely make it through the rain, enjoyed..P.D.
Trevino Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Such sweetness to your write, just pondering and looking at the flowers from a distance hoping for them to make it, loved it, =(^.^)=Royal
Solomon Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Beautiful!
Neels Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:18 AM
Wow, I love this Michael... Staring out my window with the rain pouring down, maybe you can send your flowers to CT to have them watered :) Ps: thanks hey
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