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Strong Coffee and Onion Soup



Strong coffee and 
onion soup are what
I need on this grey
December day with
an overcast sky
and a mix of rain 
and sleet lacking 
the joie de vivre
of either.

weatherfree verse

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Ilene Bauer

December 1, 2023 at 10:02 AM

Well said, d.w.! You’ve really captured a mood here…

D.W. Rodgers

December 1, 2023 at 11:09 AM

Thanks Irene, when the mood strikes - jot it down. Dave

Daniel Henry Rodgers

December 1, 2023 at 9:27 AM

DW, your poem beautifully captures the essence of a dreary December day. The vivid imagery and the unique juxtaposition of strong coffee and onion soup create a tangible atmosphere that resonates with the reader’s senses. Excellent work! Blessings, From another Rodgers

D.W. Rodgers

December 1, 2023 at 11:10 AM

Thanks Daniel, good to hear from another Rodgers with a "d."