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strong easterly breeze stirs spirea chipmunk runs
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George Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 9:09 PM
Chipmunks are so close to squirrels in appearance. The breeze and the rodent are equally strong and fast. Great Monoku !
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 2:48 AM
Why, thank you, Valsa. Yes, those little critters are fast, strong and can hold a lot of nuts in their cheeks. I call them little vacuum cleaners because of what they can cram in their mouths. Sara K
Sharma Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 8:19 PM
We have little squirrels running around in the garden and it is fun to watch them!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 2:46 AM
Dr. Sharma, they are fun to watch but they can be destructive though. The chipmunks make tunnels in the ground and can cause a lot of yard problems. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 5:37 PM
this is just as clever and quick as that squirrel...what a delightful read, Sara K...wishing you a pleasant week ahead, hugs & blessings, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 2:45 AM
Sara B, thank you Sara B. Early Sunday from the kitchen window I saw the chipmunk run from the spirea bush and then noticed the spirea bush astir. I had not noticed that the wind was blowing really hard but then I did. At first, I thought the chipmunk had stirred the bush. LOL..Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 1:53 PM
A cute "strong" Monoku write and picture. They sure are fast. Have a great week writing away.............
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Thank you, Paula. They are fast and there is always some humor in their antics. Of course, they are only doing what chipmunks do and don't know they are doing any antics. Sara K
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