Strong

Strong family bonds unlaced by inheritance went down the toilet. Strong friendship for years evolved into their technological imaginary life, against the purity of enjoying a simple conversation having a coffee. Stronger laces among us, should be knitted before we are blown out by the storm. The strong sun, moon and stars should join their light to make us to reconsider to be, instead of not to be.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/13/2024 6:53:00 AM

Dear Maria, Such powerful words for us, to cherish true bonds and real connections. May we find strength in simplicity and knitting tighter ties before the storm. I think that we must truly reconsider what matters most - being present, together, illuminated by love's guiding light. Great Poem! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/14/2024 12:31:00 AM

Good morning dear Daniel. Your words are full of wisdom. Thank you so much for your kind comment. Have a great weekend. Hugs/María

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/12/2024 4:38:00 PM

great poem, we must doubt of relations ships which are not strong, enjoyed your talented words Maria

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/12/2024 4:42:00 PM

Enyoy your night mon amie. Merçi bcp pour etre longtemps ici avec tes jolies paroles