Strolling Into Sunset
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Seven lines of poetry called a Septet.This particular one called a Saraband which is an Italian form..I got two different rhyme schemes so they can be:a,a,a bccb or a,x,a, bccb.It is suppose to have 8 syllables per line.I may be off on one line or two..I did not see a listing for this so I placed it under rhyme..
Come with me into life's sunset
Hold my hand as we slowly stroll
In life you are a great asset
Come with me love as we grow old
Let's grow close as we near heaven
Our love on loom close interwoven
In perfection our love unfold
Written by:Sara Kendrick
In honor of Brian Strand
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Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012
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