Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Seven lines of poetry called a Septet.This particular one called a Saraband which is an Italian form..I got two different rhyme schemes so they can be:a,a,a bccb or a,x,a, bccb.It is suppose to have 8 syllables per line.I may be off on one line or two..I did not see a listing for this so I placed it under rhyme..

Strolling Into Sunset

Come with me into life's sunset
Hold my hand as we slowly stroll
In life you are a great asset
Come with me love as we grow old
Let's grow close as we near heaven
Our love on loom close interwoven 
In perfection our love unfold

Written by:Sara Kendrick
In honor of Brian Strand
Contest: 1 to 7
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Sashi Prabhu February 19, 2012 at 10:14 AM very beautifully depicted and crafted words. congrats on your win~

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2012 at 9:20 PM Just saw the lovely picture to go with this gem, Sara. Congrats on a great win.

Erich Goller February 17, 2012 at 8:09 PM Lovely Title, beautiful poem,Congratulation on your 1st place win,God bless you. Hugs!Eich

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2012 at 9:56 PM congrats Sara on a marvelous win for this magnficent masterful write luv.. amazing lines as always ...

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 15, 2012 at 9:53 PM Congrats, Sara. TThis is beautiful and romantic! Blessings, Rhonda

Samual Ronthorpe February 15, 2012 at 3:42 PM Sara, this is a wonderful write. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe

Connie Marcum Wong February 15, 2012 at 2:22 PM A perfect title for this wonderful winning poem. A mind soothe to read. Congratulations.

Jack Horne February 15, 2012 at 1:33 PM What a beautiful piece, my friend. Many congrats on your wins : )

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2012 at 12:56 PM Beautiful written Sara, I have "click" and it was beautiful to. Happy for yours win Sara.- Good luck in the contest Sara! - oxox love from Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown February 15, 2012 at 12:00 PM Congratulations on your super 1st place win in Brian Strand's "Short & Sweet" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud February 15, 2012 at 9:54 AM ohh, what i; give to have a slice of this sunset, sara... a languid, graceful work so well done!..:) huggs and winning wishes!

Harry Horsman February 15, 2012 at 8:55 AM Wonderful this lane of life, you write today Sara, awesome, love this. harry

Cory Long February 14, 2012 at 8:04 PM this was beautiful nicely done cory

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2012 at 7:41 PM HELLO... SARA... HOW ARE YOU TODAY? HAVING FUN I CAN IMAGINE... IF NOT YOU SHOULD BE.. UNLESS YOU ARE SICK... A VERY NICE STROLL... VERY PEACEFUL... THANK YOU FOR SHARING... HOPE YOUR ENJOYING... TODAY. Happy valentine days... ~ :-) Always, * PD

Russell Sivey February 14, 2012 at 7:13 PM This is a wonderful form you have found here Sara! I love this write! I had incredible enjoyment out of this poem this evening my friend! Great Work!!

Lizanne Scholtz February 14, 2012 at 7:10 PM This is really beautiful and so romantic Sara, love it, Elizabeth ps hope your back eases up, and you get relief from your pain soon, love Elizabeth