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Stroke My Bits

Bright skies on the horizon from where I sit Uplifting my spirits but I'm afraid to admit Takes more than weather To make us feel better Need a young floozie to stroke my bits

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/25/2017 9:23:00 AM

Maybe just your "little" bit//Did I say that? What a sh**!//Maybe with a feather?//Some kind of weather//we're having, isn't it? FLY ON FANTASY JACK!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/25/2017 7:51:00 PM

Methinks this warmer than normal October is about to come to a close! Oh well, spring is just around the corner!!! :(

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2017 7:52:00 AM

BEHAVE Jack or Cathie will be on your case lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/25/2017 8:43:00 AM

If she ever saw what I write.... ouweeeeeee! The couch for me!!! LOL Huggsies xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/25/2017 6:22:00 AM

Uh oh, another naughty write by you Jackson! What a funny poem though! You are quite the Limerick writer my friend! What a superior piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/25/2017 6:30:00 AM

Jack's my name... naughtiness is my game!!! lol