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Stroke-A-Back

“Stroke-a-back stroke-a-back someone’s going to touch you in a moment from now, I’ll draw the snake but I won’t end it.” The old gas light flickers above the old school wall, a game of “Stroke-a-back” To the song of the Swan waterfall. Pastoral faces full of laughter innocence disembogue, a time to relish this evanescent vogue. A fall pipe to clamber a railway bank to view, our cottage upon Sugar Hill Where the flowers once grew. Pea-shooting bobbins From Town head Mill, A Burnside clangour from a spinning shed of skill. In unison sincere looms clatter Gates Of head scarves bobbing up and down, Reed-Hook used with aptitude a woven piece for “Half-a-crown.” Eternity for the shuttle Weft and Warp intertwine, mortal weaver in traction for that packet of “Woodbine.” The mighty Oak and Sycamore shaking off the morning dew, mist that mingled undaunted footprints that followed the view. For there, where twilight kisses the breeze behold carpets of Lavender Blue, The sweet scent of the Honeysuckle Clement “Nesfield” Grew. If one could walk within a memory caress a perpetual dream, then one would have to believe in miracles a mislaid youth to redeem. 'Stroke-a-Back' is a hide and seek game' © Harry J Horsman 1995

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Date: 8/11/2021 8:57:00 PM
Love your wonderful, nostalgic poem, recalling precious childhood memories, Harry. This is in my faves. :)
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Date: 8/10/2021 6:45:00 PM
Wonderful poem. The final lines are brilliant.
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Date: 8/10/2021 4:28:00 PM
Hello Harry ... bringing back the good old days in such a delightful verse. You've done it again Harry - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 8/9/2021 11:52:00 AM
Twilight kisses and hide and seek, I loved all these and more, when I was young and wild. Guess I still am for enjoying this Harry, Have a great day, Always young at heart, :)
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Date: 8/9/2021 10:07:00 AM
What a wonderful poem, I love it, childhood memories never fade. Thanks for your gracious visit to page. Blessings and kindest regards
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Date: 8/8/2021 6:28:00 AM
Love it, Harry! Oh to capture the scents, sounds, joy of childhood, the games, the laughter!
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Date: 8/5/2021 12:06:00 PM
- The time that never comes back ... a wonderful memory, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/5/2021 3:14:00 AM
Great memories you speak of, Harry:) who has not played this game? I did not know it had another name until you mentioned it:)
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Date: 8/4/2021 1:09:00 PM
Sounds like a great deal of fun, thank you for the explanation, is it a terminology used in Yorkshire for hide and seek I'd love to know. Hope you are well, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/4/2021 12:13:00 AM
Seems like an enjoyable game... Loved the description... Thanks for sharing the game with us...
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Date: 8/4/2021 12:13:00 AM
Seems like an enjoyable game... Loved the description... Thanks for sharing the game with us...
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Date: 8/3/2021 5:14:00 PM
wow, so nostalgic. I am glad you explained the title at the end. I had no idea it was hide and seek but it really made sense to me knowing its meaning. Very well done, harry.
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Date: 8/3/2021 5:12:00 PM
thanks so much for seeing my chapbook recently . Let me read this poem now.
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Date: 8/3/2021 8:52:00 AM
WoW! Harry, You have penned such a fun, upbeat, nostalgic write. Your final stanza was so profound. Thanks for sharing such fond memories. Well done:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/3/2021 2:20:00 AM
Your works are really great. Though with a glimpse of nostalgia, the narration of the game is interesting.
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Date: 8/3/2021 12:45:00 AM
Lovely to look back Harry bet it only seems like yesterday. Tom
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Date: 8/2/2021 11:05:00 PM
Not sure but it seems a ping pong game Whatever, memories are there not to be lost.
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Date: 8/2/2021 8:20:00 PM
A wonderful memory you've shared Harry. I've never heard of Stroke-a-back. Was it popular? :)
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Date: 8/2/2021 7:01:00 PM
Thank you for sharing.
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