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Striving For Happiness

We felt the joy of the soft mellow breeze, sighing down the hill, As we lay sprawled beneath a cedar that grew beside a rill. Shrubs abounded, meadows covered with splashes of daffodil. One day we'll be wed there where divine nature displayed goodwill. Bells tolled from our chapel anticipating us with a thrill.

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/25/2021 10:10:00 AM

love the feel of the breeze and beauty of the surrounding scenery my friend. a romantic write. Hugs Eve

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/23/2021 12:20:00 PM

A beautiful romantic Monorhyme Victor, in echoes of the mind, very nicely written… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/22/2021 12:43:00 PM

Your romantic nature flirts outrageously with your superb writes - the two together great dynamite poems! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/22/2021 11:58:00 AM

Hello Victor , this is beautifully done. Very romantic. Enjoy your day myfriend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/22/2021 11:54:00 AM

Romantic beautiful scenery, with a chapel waiting. Divine! A wonderful poem.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/22/2021 10:21:00 AM

WoW! Victor, You've penned such a beautiful romantic monorhyme. Lovely imagery as well. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/22/2021 9:15:00 AM

Lovely poem, romance aligned with nature it works beautifully....Delice

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/22/2021 6:23:00 AM

Romantic love in a heavenly soul, so well written monorhyme Victor, blessings and peace

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/22/2021 4:54:00 AM

Romance blossoms! Lovely write

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/22/2021 4:40:00 AM

A heavenly place you describe, Victor. Romantic sentiments emanate from your words.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2021 4:14:00 AM

Very romantic verse Victor, everyone deserves a little bit of happiness in their lives. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/22/2021 2:55:00 AM

- As always a wonderful poem from you, Victor ... miss reading and writing ... but I'm too tired ... (the medicine makes me tired and dizzy) - I'm much better, but not quite ready to write poems :) - Have a lovely day, no one is forgotten ... I think of you every day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/22/2021 4:03:00 AM

I think of you often, always hoping. Hugs.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/22/2021 12:42:00 AM

aww so beautiful and romantic Victor and such lovely imagery and rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/21/2021 11:27:00 PM

How beautiful!!! Wonderful scenery where the daffodils spread over the meadow and to feel mellow breeze from hill and lovely ending line... I enjoyed reading it..