Victor Buhagiar Poet Monorhyme

Striving For Happiness

We felt the joy of the soft mellow breeze, sighing down the hill,
As we lay sprawled beneath a cedar that grew beside a rill.
Shrubs abounded, meadows covered with splashes of daffodil.
One day we'll be wed there where divine nature displayed goodwill.
Bells tolled from our chapel anticipating us with a thrill.

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Eve Roper June 25, 2021 at 10:10 AM love the feel of the breeze and beauty of the surrounding scenery my friend. a romantic write. Hugs Eve

Beryl Edmonds June 23, 2021 at 12:20 PM A beautiful romantic Monorhyme Victor, in echoes of the mind, very nicely written… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos June 22, 2021 at 12:43 PM Your romantic nature flirts outrageously with your superb writes - the two together great dynamite poems! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu June 22, 2021 at 11:58 AM Hello Victor , this is beautifully done. Very romantic. Enjoy your day myfriend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 22, 2021 at 11:54 AM Romantic beautiful scenery, with a chapel waiting. Divine! A wonderful poem.

Alexis Y. June 22, 2021 at 10:21 AM WoW! Victor, You've penned such a beautiful romantic monorhyme. Lovely imagery as well. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Delice Arleen Skelly June 22, 2021 at 9:15 AM Lovely poem, romance aligned with nature it works beautifully....Delice

Sotto Poet June 22, 2021 at 6:23 AM Romantic love in a heavenly soul, so well written monorhyme Victor, blessings and peace

Unseeking Seeker June 22, 2021 at 4:54 AM Romance blossoms! Lovely write

Vijay Pandit June 22, 2021 at 4:40 AM A heavenly place you describe, Victor. Romantic sentiments emanate from your words.

Tom Cunningham June 22, 2021 at 4:14 AM Very romantic verse Victor, everyone deserves a little bit of happiness in their lives. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen June 22, 2021 at 2:55 AM - As always a wonderful poem from you, Victor ... miss reading and writing ... but I'm too tired ... (the medicine makes me tired and dizzy) - I'm much better, but not quite ready to write poems :) - Have a lovely day, no one is forgotten ... I think of you every day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Victor Buhagiar June 22, 2021 at 4:03 AM I think of you often, always hoping. Hugs.

Jan Allison June 22, 2021 at 12:42 AM aww so beautiful and romantic Victor and such lovely imagery and rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan June 21, 2021 at 11:27 PM How beautiful!!! Wonderful scenery where the daffodils spread over the meadow and to feel mellow breeze from hill and lovely ending line... I enjoyed reading it..