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Striving For Happiness

We felt the joy of the soft mellow breeze, sighing down the hill, As we lay sprawled beneath a cedar that grew beside a rill. Shrubs abounded, meadows covered with splashes of daffodil. One day we'll be wed there where divine nature displayed goodwill. Bells tolled from our chapel anticipating us with a thrill.

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Date: 6/25/2021 10:10:00 AM
love the feel of the breeze and beauty of the surrounding scenery my friend. a romantic write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/23/2021 12:20:00 PM
A beautiful romantic Monorhyme Victor, in echoes of the mind, very nicely written… Belle
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:43:00 PM
Your romantic nature flirts outrageously with your superb writes - the two together great dynamite poems! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/22/2021 11:58:00 AM
Hello Victor , this is beautifully done. Very romantic. Enjoy your day myfriend.
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Date: 6/22/2021 11:54:00 AM
Romantic beautiful scenery, with a chapel waiting. Divine! A wonderful poem.
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Date: 6/22/2021 10:21:00 AM
WoW! Victor, You've penned such a beautiful romantic monorhyme. Lovely imagery as well. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/22/2021 9:15:00 AM
Lovely poem, romance aligned with nature it works beautifully....Delice
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Date: 6/22/2021 6:23:00 AM
Romantic love in a heavenly soul, so well written monorhyme Victor, blessings and peace
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Date: 6/22/2021 4:54:00 AM
Romance blossoms! Lovely write
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Date: 6/22/2021 4:40:00 AM
A heavenly place you describe, Victor. Romantic sentiments emanate from your words.
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Date: 6/22/2021 4:14:00 AM
Very romantic verse Victor, everyone deserves a little bit of happiness in their lives. Tom
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Date: 6/22/2021 2:55:00 AM
- As always a wonderful poem from you, Victor ... miss reading and writing ... but I'm too tired ... (the medicine makes me tired and dizzy) - I'm much better, but not quite ready to write poems :) - Have a lovely day, no one is forgotten ... I think of you every day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/22/2021 4:03:00 AM
I think of you often, always hoping. Hugs.
Date: 6/22/2021 12:42:00 AM
aww so beautiful and romantic Victor and such lovely imagery and rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/21/2021 11:27:00 PM
How beautiful!!! Wonderful scenery where the daffodils spread over the meadow and to feel mellow breeze from hill and lovely ending line... I enjoyed reading it..
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