Striving For Better Life

----starting from the buttom-----
When I was born I couldn't spell
A story that I can't even tell
But I bet all I ever completed in my life was to sell
I ate a egg with a shell
A smell I can't forget

I remember it like it was yesterday
Through my darkest days I will find my brightest bays.
Well,success is the song I sing..I'm not here to sin.
Though people think that I'm a sinner I know deep down my soul
that I'm a writer 

It felt like
I kept my dreams
My meals was so horrible like a rotten creams...
I sold Everything I sow.....
And the things I saw was terrible
Hoping that my imagination will oneday lead me to my perfection
A slope I cannot elope

But beared What I was told...
My hopes hidden in my pains
And never be ruined when it rained.
People undermine ,people underestimate.
Buh the pride they have will never influence my ride.
Because somewhere in the future I will rise..

Life full of possibilities and responsibilities.
Is almost like I can't do it right.
But I can do it quite Fine.

That is my accomplishments
I knew that life will not be like this forever...
Indeed life is new..
Through my poorest days I found my richest says

But I know when I'm old...
I will hold What I sold
Just because I was told...
That somewhere in the future I will hold 
Nothing but Gold.
------Now I'm Here-------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/2/2015 10:38:00 PM
Superb write Xihluke that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
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Xihluke Mlangeni
Date: 8/3/2015 6:03:00 AM
Dr.Upma Thank you very much I appreciate your support . !!God bless you!!!
Date: 8/2/2015 12:02:00 AM
Xihluke, congratulations. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 8/2/2015 2:01:00 AM
Skat Thank u very much I appreciate it *hugs*@nd*kisses*
Date: 6/22/2015 4:50:00 PM
Hi Xihluke, Congrats on your awesome win. LOVE SKAT
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Xihluke Mlangeni
Date: 7/3/2015 1:01:00 AM
Hi Skat Thank you very much.For your feedback Love Xihluke
Date: 6/22/2015 4:05:00 PM
Xihluke, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA
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Xihluke Mlangeni
Date: 6/22/2015 4:42:00 PM
Mmmm..Linda Thank you very much and God bless you.
Date: 6/19/2015 7:29:00 AM
OUTSTANDING... GOD is watching and GOD is GOOD...
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Date: 6/22/2015 4:44:00 PM
Milton Indeed God is Great. And .....All times God is Great
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