Strive Or Thrive

Time demands ever People apply ruler hardest Stunting life..desires.!

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/26/2023 6:56:00 AM

Ouch. Glum picture Joe, but so true. :)

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/26/2023 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so much

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/25/2023 3:30:00 PM

Keep writing what’s true for you. Whether up or down. Nobody said poetry must be the bluebird of happiness. Nor silly Keep writing Joe Pangie

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/25/2023 9:52:00 PM

Poetry is part of Gods creative Makup Pangie..I we just have To open up and see what He decides to give out.'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2023 10:19:00 AM

Good one. Velly velly . Haha

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/24/2023 9:37:00 PM

Welly welly..We have to try to Give it some, if the desire is to Be kept alive Andrea.' Welly is A slang word for wellington so The impute is 'just to re-boot' The peice.' A bit.!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2023 3:07:00 AM

Whoa!! Sad that our responsibilities take away from enjoying life. Thank you for sharing. Sara

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/21/2023 7:12:00 AM

Hi Sara, may all be well there I wish I felt more like writing Reflective and more cheery Literature i dont like the heavy stuff the world needs to counter the evil plans.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2023 1:54:00 AM

- True : "Time demands ever" ... always rules to follow ... great written, Joe -

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/21/2023 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Anne-lise great to see you here.