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Strive For the Best

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Endeavoring to earn a needle in a high stack. Such a story could be said to be pebbly. I'd admire to be by a moving plane slack. Step onward to the top mark of the mountain. To discover Paradise, I'll sail the ocean. Then, the matchless clock began to strike badly. However, I hide behind a delicate, humble fiction. Lose all resources totally in a fantasy yack. Written: August 27, 2021 Rhyme: A/B/A/C/C/B/C/A.

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/28/2021 7:29:00 AM

If at first you don’t succeed try, try again….Delice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/28/2021 1:57:00 AM

Despite the difficulty of the rhyme scheme, this poem flows smoothly.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/28/2021 4:44:00 AM

Appreciate your nice feedback; your appreciation means a lot to me. Have a great weekend.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/27/2021 7:43:00 PM

Enjoyed the poem Lasaad, the rhythm and flow and content full of good advice to strive for the best… Belle

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/28/2021 4:42:00 AM

Thank you very much, Belle, for your kind comment, have a nice weekend

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/27/2021 12:28:00 PM

Much in your poem speaks to striving for the best. Good title; interesting write.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 12:49:00 PM

Thank you very much, Milton; your nice words are uplifting and mean a lot to me. Blessings

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/27/2021 11:21:00 AM

I enjoyed this Lasaad. Well done. I hope all is well :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 12:52:00 PM

I'm glad you enjoy it, Heidi, thanks for your comment and for your kindness. Be Blessed

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/27/2021 11:15:00 AM

A wonderful message written in a much beautiful poetic form, dear Lasaad! Blessings

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 12:52:00 PM

Thank you very much, Dear Demetrios; your comment motivates me and means a lot to me. Blessings

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/27/2021 10:40:00 AM

I like the message in your title and the essence of your poem, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 10:46:00 AM

I'm glad you like it, dear, Vijay, and thank you so much for your precious visit and comment. Blessings