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Strive For the Best

Endeavoring to earn a needle in a high stack. 
Such a story could be said to be pebbly. 
I'd admire to be by a moving plane slack. 
Step onward to the top mark of the mountain. 
To discover Paradise, I'll sail the ocean. 
Then, the matchless clock began to strike badly. 
However, I hide behind a delicate, humble fiction. 
Lose all resources totally in a fantasy yack.


Written: August 27, 2021

Rhyme: A/B/A/C/C/B/C/A.

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Delice Arleen Skelly August 28, 2021 at 7:29 AM If at first you don’t succeed try, try again….Delice

Victor Buhagiar August 28, 2021 at 1:57 AM Despite the difficulty of the rhyme scheme, this poem flows smoothly. Sotto Poet August 28, 2021 at 4:44 AM Appreciate your nice feedback; your appreciation means a lot to me. Have a great weekend.

Beryl Edmonds August 27, 2021 at 7:43 PM Enjoyed the poem Lasaad, the rhythm and flow and content full of good advice to strive for the best… Belle Sotto Poet August 28, 2021 at 4:42 AM Thank you very much, Belle, for your kind comment, have a nice weekend

L Milton Hankins August 27, 2021 at 12:28 PM Much in your poem speaks to striving for the best. Good title; interesting write. Sotto Poet August 27, 2021 at 12:49 PM Thank you very much, Milton; your nice words are uplifting and mean a lot to me. Blessings

Heidi Sands August 27, 2021 at 11:21 AM I enjoyed this Lasaad. Well done. I hope all is well :) Sotto Poet August 27, 2021 at 12:52 PM I'm glad you enjoy it, Heidi, thanks for your comment and for your kindness. Be Blessed

Demetrios Trifiatis August 27, 2021 at 11:15 AM A wonderful message written in a much beautiful poetic form, dear Lasaad! Blessings Sotto Poet August 27, 2021 at 12:52 PM Thank you very much, Dear Demetrios; your comment motivates me and means a lot to me. Blessings

Vijay Pandit August 27, 2021 at 10:40 AM I like the message in your title and the essence of your poem, Lasaad. Sotto Poet August 27, 2021 at 10:46 AM I'm glad you like it, dear, Vijay, and thank you so much for your precious visit and comment. Blessings