Stripped Bare and Barren

at the journey’s end stripped bare; barren, withered tree--- lies in final sleep ~*~

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Sandra Adams

Date: 10/14/2012 2:50:00 PM

beautiful imagery....you handle this style very well!

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/11/2012 6:01:00 AM

Quite a deep write you have here Annalise. How are you doing? love Wilma

Kaye S-

Date: 10/10/2012 11:19:00 AM

This is sad yet beautifully written. Thanks Annalise for your encouraging words in my poem!

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/8/2012 8:32:00 AM

Truly deep here. Great job, Annalise!

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/6/2012 9:39:00 AM

Great haiku, Annalise! Love and hugs, Jack xox

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/5/2012 6:38:00 PM

It is such a dramatic sad poem...but isn't that where we are all headed, best to be there in a state of preparedness so the waking-up-morning will be a joyous one. A beautiful Haiku, my sis. Always outdoing yourself.Thanks for lovely comments. One love and hope all is well. Joy Wells

Kash Poet

Date: 10/5/2012 1:33:00 AM

Very nice haiku here Annalise.Glad to see a new poem from you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2012 1:21:00 AM

Annalise, well written haiku - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/4/2012 8:10:00 PM

Trees have a finite lifespan, but it's still much longer than ours. Good haiku.