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Stripped Bare and Barren

at the journey’s end
stripped bare; barren, withered tree---
lies in final sleep
~*~

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2012

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October 14, 2012 at 2:50 PM

beautiful imagery....you handle this style very well!

October 11, 2012 at 6:01 AM

Quite a deep write you have here Annalise. How are you doing? love Wilma

October 10, 2012 at 11:19 AM

This is sad yet beautifully written. Thanks Annalise for your encouraging words in my poem!

October 8, 2012 at 8:32 AM

Truly deep here. Great job, Annalise!

October 6, 2012 at 9:39 AM

Great haiku, Annalise! Love and hugs, Jack xox

October 5, 2012 at 6:38 PM

It is such a dramatic sad poem...but isn't that where we are all headed, best to be there in a state of preparedness so the waking-up-morning will be a joyous one. A beautiful Haiku, my sis. Always outdoing yourself.Thanks for lovely comments. One love and hope all is well. Joy Wells

October 5, 2012 at 1:33 AM

Very nice haiku here Annalise.Glad to see a new poem from you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 5, 2012 at 1:21 AM

Annalise, well written haiku - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

October 4, 2012 at 8:10 PM

Trees have a finite lifespan, but it's still much longer than ours. Good haiku.

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