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Strings Attached

a gaze felt softly
     pulling on wistful heartstrings…
           your puppeteer eyes

desirelongingsenryu

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Line Gauthier

May 25, 2019 at 8:47 AM

Well penned, David. Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

May 24, 2019 at 9:26 PM

Love it...puppeteer eyes! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

May 24, 2019 at 7:13 PM

oh this makes ,me want to swoon. Congrats on the well deserved win. i do not see you often but when I do, I am never disappointed.

Susan Ashley

May 24, 2019 at 6:59 PM

Your poem is breathtaking in its wistful romance, David. Stunning last line. Congratulations on your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Poet Destroyer A

January 13, 2016 at 11:12 PM

DAVID, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi

January 9, 2016 at 3:44 AM

Congrats David, for your placement and WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Skat A

January 8, 2016 at 7:40 PM

David, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT

Jean Mcloughlin

January 8, 2016 at 4:50 AM

Beautiful David, congrats on your win. From Jean

Nette Onclaud

January 1, 2015 at 9:19 AM

i know this will win, david.. many congrats and happy new year!

Paul Callus

December 30, 2014 at 11:14 AM

Hi David...I have not seen the other entries yet, but this would have been a hard one to beat; excellence in 3 lines! #7 well done. All the best for 2015. // paul

Eve Roper

December 30, 2014 at 9:26 AM

Love your poem, congratulations on your win. Blessing and a Happy New Year

Eve Roper

December 30, 2014 at 9:26 AM

Sara Kendrick

December 30, 2014 at 7:35 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Very moving work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Sara Kendrick

December 30, 2014 at 7:36 AM

Oh! Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 29, 2014 at 3:15 PM

So small, yet says so much. Brilliantly thought out and delivered. Congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

December 29, 2014 at 12:40 AM

a VERY well deserved win!!

Richard Lamoureux

December 28, 2014 at 2:02 PM

Nicely done, short and impactful write!

Poet Destroyer A

December 28, 2014 at 9:04 AM

David, a wonderful win... congrats..PD

Jan Allison

December 27, 2014 at 1:18 PM

Dropping back with my congrats David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

December 27, 2014 at 12:34 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Maurice Yvonne

December 27, 2014 at 12:32 PM

Absolutely amazing, WOWOWOW! A Fav!

Sandra Haight

December 27, 2014 at 12:20 PM

An awesome Senryu, David...so much said in so few words with such a twist! I have seen those eyes and how they control!! Congratulations on your huge win! Sandra

John Lawless

December 27, 2014 at 11:35 AM

David, all I could see when I read this was the mournful eyes of a hungry "puddy-tat". A well conceived Senryu. Thanks for participating in my first attempt at a contest