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String of Pearls

Remembering that night of you the peak of what mere light can do, those tiny rainbows shone, to what was mine alone, about your neck in purple, gold and blue. from hiding deep within the sea, in oyster shells, so perfectly, the treasure is all mine, continueing to shine, throughout my very fondest memory. Your string of pearls, and no regrets, led me to where no mind forgets, my coming on for you, was all that I could do, beyond a loving dare, or losing bets. Becoming one of those you wear, about your neck, touching your hair, I'll be a loving stone, like you have never known, and strung upon your necklace there. Breath deeply, I will be with you, when you're most needing someone who has loved you just because; and for what good it was; who'd die to be another pearl for you. REV 01/31/2011 Ft Dix NJ

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/28/2015 9:49:00 AM
If not for Judy writing a tribute to you I would not be enjoying your poetry this morning. I can see why she is enamoured.
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:58:00 PM
Vee \ .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/5/2011 11:06:00 AM
This is a chain of Limericks? My goodness....The precise flow with unfolding story. A no nonsense approach. Impressive with a Capital I
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:07:00 PM
Very beautiful set of words... Enjoyed it a lot. Love it, Sami
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Date: 2/23/2011 8:17:00 AM
nice write=))
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Date: 2/21/2011 3:06:00 PM
Fort Dix, NJ? You are practically a neighbor of mine. Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here. What you have here is a chain of limerick poems. This is an impressive first submission.
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:03:00 AM
So beautifully worded!
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:27:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more post like this one..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:49:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed..... always intriguing...Thanks
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Date: 2/9/2011 11:43:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Ron. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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