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Strike Me Twice

Suddenly found in a situation that would scare,
half an idea, half unaware,
perplexed, yet bare,
I’m here, but where?

enter instinct,
brain unravels threads,
Overdrive instant
Occupy half my head

Into a state with senses heightened, mental survival, 
no time for frightened, 
taken down unsighted, 
impromptu strike, 
who’s the fight with? 
Who to bite? 

This all unlikely 
who doesn’t like me 
acts impolitely 
seems to spite me? 

We live in a world of warning 
you can sense the storm forming, 
but any indications went undetected 
negotiations were neglected
just striking me down unexpected 
Must be a dictator or total ickhead  

Empowered no doubt 
there’s a coward about 
a pretty little flower 
Full of resentment and sour, 

when where why, what?
Seems a rival is striking their plot
When where why what?
it's what we’re alive for brings out what you’ve got 

the cause? 
what sores? 
Can’t pause, 
it soars,

This is a war they know they can’t win
a sneaky attack from behind to begin
now they go into a silence hiding 
find them and give them a bloody good hiding

A sick mind with minion lice
too thick to behave and treat nice
announce to them and warn advice
their war will end if they strike me twice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/26/2023 8:04:00 AM
the rhyme scheme in this poem is creative and the the quatrains are well devised also. Loved the passion of the message.
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Nick Trim
Date: 7/3/2023 6:56:00 PM
Thank you Autumn

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