Stressed

Serious labour,    we get boreD
Though the task, burdensomE
Real struggle...  they  oppresS
Enlivened thus,  our  progresS
Soon,  with us  they'll  jubilatE
Sure  now,   theirs  the poweR
Eventual  desserts, we  awaiT
Delectation  upon  the  stresS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 1:53 PM
Nice wordsmithing!
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:22 AM
Thank you for your kind words dear Kim. Much love, Adeniji.
Fields Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 10:09 PM
I think kindness is much more interesting, great way of putting it.
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 9:42 AM
Thank you dear Verlecia. Much love, Adeniji.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 10:02 AM
How clever, so much thought was put into this piece.
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Thanks very much dear Richard. Best wishes always, Adeniji.
Gauthier Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 4:00 PM
This double acrostic is quite witty, Adeniji. Well done.
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Really? Appreciations to you Gauthier. Best regards, Adeniji.
Romios Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Great Acrostic..,hurrah Panagiota
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, Panagiota. Much love, Adeniji
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 8:11 AM
wow an incredible poem - a double acrostic with end rhyme- Bravo Adeniji:-) hugs Jan xx
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 10:30 AM
Thank you Allison. Much love, Adeniji
Trifiatis Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Admirable double Acrostic!!! Much impressed my friend, Adeniji! Bravo!
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 8:04 AM
Thank you dear Demetrios. Much love, Adeniji
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 8:04 AM
Thank you dear Demetrios. Much love, Adeniji
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