Stress

To want but not be wanted 
To trust but not be trusted 
To feel but not be felt 
To lust but not be lusted 

To speak but not be heard 
To see but not be observed 
To reach but not be touched 
To deliver but not be served 

To follow but never lead 
To try but never succeed 
To give but never receive 
To hunger but never feed 

To listen but never hear 
To rap but never rhyme 
To lose but never win 
To seek but never find 

To wake up missing everything 
Not knowing where you lost it 
The source of my greatest stress 
And guess what, you caused it 

“Stress” 
by:  Eric L. Boddie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Scott Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Stress is always the true test of ones success, and you my beautiful poetic pen, are truly dressed for success!!! Okay, I'm smiling again!!! 7+
Mason Gibbs Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 8:34 PM
That's truly an awesome poem Eric, very well done.
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM
thank you gwen....most people will be able to relate to it....;)
A   Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 12:59 PM
so much deep meaning to this, very thought provoking there's so much negative to be observed but not giving up is key there is always light at the end of a tunnel, enjoyed your write
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:13 PM
thank you pd....hope exists within us all....we just have to realize and look for it....;)
Deschler Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 9:35 PM
A great rhyming piece that flows so smoothly... Surely, we can all relate to the stresses you've expressed here... Very nice work, Eric!
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:12 PM
thank you Kelly....that is what I was aiming for....;)
Godwin Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Good poem - I enjoyed the theme and rhyme... CayCay
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:11 PM
thank you caycay....not everyone can relate to Love but we all know some form of pain....;)
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 9:01 AM
As we grow older that is the questions we ask ourselves hugs eve 7
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:07 PM
thanks eve....very wise words....;)
Hay Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Reads and flows really well, it is filled with emotion, well done, kind rgds, Laura
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:06 PM
thank you laura....painful inspiration offers great power....;)
Y. Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Eric, you penned a well written piece. It grabs the reader's attention instantly. I find myself in deep thought due to your skilful pen. I did not expect the ending. But I was not disappointed. I'm totally amazed by your gifted pen. Thanks for sharing. :-)Alexis
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:04 PM
thank you so much alexis....this was all during a transitional part of my being....lol
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